Sample IELTS overpopulation essay

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One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?

There is no doubt that the massive increase in the worldʼs population in the last 100 years has created a crisis. In order to find a solution to this crisis, politicians need to deal with not only the immediate problems, but also the long-term causes if they want to rescue humanity. Finding the right policies is not an easy task as it is a complex problem.

The first step is to recognise what the consequences of overpopulation are. Only by doing this can we find an appropriate solution. Perhaps its most important effect is the increased rate at which we are consuming the Earthʼs resources such as oil. To combat this, governments need to do more research on alternative and renewable energy supplies so that we do not use up all the oil reserves. Another negative effect of overpopulation is how some countries suffer from a lack of basic necessities such as food. Here, an answer could be greater international co-operation so that countries with a food surplus donate what they do not need to the less fortunate countries.

It is not quite so easy to decide how governments should deal with the causes of overpopulation. The Chinese have adopted legislation that requires parents to pay a special tax if they have more than one child. I doubt, however, whether this solution is realistic in other countries. Another option would be to improve levels of sex education by explaining the difficulties caused by having too many children.Promoting contraception though may be problematic in many regions on cultural and religious grounds.

In conclusion, while it may be possible to find ways to address some of the consequences of overpopulation by international co-operation, it is harder to find policies to deal with its causes. It might be that the only way forward is for different countries to adopt policies that work within their particular culture.

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Understanding the IELTS overpopulation essay question

One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?

What does this essay ask you to write about?

  1.  overpopulation
  2.  the causes of overpopulation
  3. the causes and effects of overpopulation
  4. policies to deal with the causes and effects of overpopulation

It is of course 4. If you try 1,2 or 3 you will lose heavily. This is an easy mistake to make and many, many candidates will do just that.

The importance of the introduction

If you want to avoid the mistake of not answering the question, you need to get the introduction right. What you must do is identify all the following:
  1. causes of overpopulation
  2. effects of overpopulation
  3. the policies to deal with causes and effects of overpopulation
If you can do that, the essay you write will almost certainly be on task. You have set the “programme” for the rest of the essay.

Suggestion

As a training exercise try and use these words from the question and write the introduction yourself

  • policy
  • overpopulation
  • cause
  • effect
If you do that, you are almost certainly on task. You may then look at my essay to see if you can find words/phrases to replace those words because in the ideal world you don’t want to repeat the language of the question too much.

Structure of the essay

This time I am only going to highlight the all-important topic sentences. I want you to see the structure. The sentences

  • come early in the paragraph
  • are short
  • are clear
You should also see that these sentences relate directly to the task of the question. If yours don’t, you may well go off task. Or be marked as not making the task response: “visible enough”.

 

One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?

INTRODUCTION

The first step is to recognise what the consequences of overpopulation are. Only by doing this can we find an appropriate solution. Perhaps its most important effect is the increased rate at which we are consuming the Earth’s resources such as oil. To combat this, governments need to do more research on alternative and renewable energy supplies so that we do not use up all the oil reserves. Another negative effect of overpopulation is how some countries suffer from a lack of basic necessities such as food. Here, an answer could be greater international co-operation so that countries with a food surplus donate what they do not need to the less fortunate countries.

It is not quite so easy to decide how governments should deal with the causes of overpopulation. The Chinese have adopted legislation that requires parents to pay a special tax if they have more than one child. I doubt, however, whether this solution is realistic in other countries. Another option would be to improve levels of sex education by explaining the difficulties caused by having too many children.Promoting contraception though may be problematic in many regions on cultural and religious grounds.

In conclusion, while it may be possible to find ways to address some of the consequences of overpopulation by international co-operation, it is harder to find policies to deal with its causes. It might be that the only way forward is for different countries to adopt policies that work within their particular culture.

 

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5 Responses to Sample IELTS overpopulation essay

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  3. leman July 17, 2011 at 6:48 pm #

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    Dominic Cole July 17, 2011 at 7:40 pm #

    Hi

    The idea here is to show you how to read the question and organise your answer.

    The main point is that your introduction should reflect the task of the question. The other significant point is that each paragraph should also have a topic sentence that clearly relates to the task.

    What I’d like you to do is write your own introduction and then compare it to mine, Did you do the same things or something different? You will find my introduction in the download.

    I’m a teacher. I don’t want to make it too easy and for you simply to copy my essay – you probably won’t learn anything that way. I’d like people to learn about writing introductions. One good way to do that is just to write the introduction and not the whole essay.

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