Avoiding repetition and being cohesive
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Look at these extracts from some of my sample essays and task 1 reports and fill in the missing linking language.
1. There are several reasons why these innovations in agriculture can be said to positive.
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is that the world’s population has exploded within the past century and that traditional methods of
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could not provide sufficient food for everyone.
2.It is fairly easy to understand the reasons why this proposal has been made. The reasoning is that if workers are not allowed to work for more than 35 hours weekly, then employers will be forced to engage more
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. There would be at least two advantages to
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3.These two pie charts show the changes in popularity of different leisure activities in the United States of America between 1999 and 2009. We can see that the most popular leisure activities were almost the same in
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periods, but there were a number of differences in popularity between
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4. In stark contrast, around as half as many Americans went cycling in 2009 as compared to ten years earlier, with the result that
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became less popular than camping, at 7% and 9%
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5. If governments spent less money on space research, then
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would be able to help solve some of these problems such as population control, elimination of diseases like cholera, global warming and food shortages.
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are more important because they affect the lives of millions of ordinary people.
6. Another option would be to try and educate people about the problems having large families can cause. It is difficult to see, however, what form this
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should take.
7. It is perhaps less obvious why books are said to be out of fashion. One possibility is that fewer people choose to read for pleasure nowadays because they prefer the instant
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and thrills of modern technology. There is less effort involved in
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a 3D movie or playing a computer game than in turning the pages of a book.
8. This chart shows the proportion of people who are able to read and write in 10 countries globally. In Bangladesh 47.5% of the population are literate, whereas in Brazil the figure is nearly double
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at 88.6%. Brazil and Colombia both have a literacy rate of around 90%, but in France and Greece the rate is significantly higher.
In Iran the number of people that have literacy skills is over 82%, while in Pakistan this
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is just under 50%.
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